Commentsthank you so much for this critique, also by the photographer. we'll keep your notes in mind when we work together again, thanks for your help in our improvement efforts
-- How would you feel about life if death was your older sister? |
Another nice detail is the fact that you've painted half your nails blue and the other half black to match your dress' hues. The tiara shows the desire for beautification regardless of the dark Gothic attire. I like how how side of your face has a small heart while the other has streaming drops of black going down from your eye. It shows different aspects of the personality divides. Your expression looks rather serious but that goes well with the dark dressing and it shows some sort of skeptical curiosity. The spine is rather stiff but it still looks good.
The only downsides I could think of were that the picture is not well centered and cropped. The space on the right hand side is larger than that on the left hand side. The color contrast is nice but an overall hue could help emphasize and accentuate the mood of the picture such as a very faint purplish blue hue. All in all I think it's a very good attempt and can translate into a few symbolic interpretations in every viewer's mind. Those are my two cents, Good job overall!